Reviews #3

Usagi's Garden
Web author: Bunny

Layout: 5/5 Good layout. Looks great for any resolution.
Content: 4/5 Pretty complete with content.
Creativity: 5/5 I like the whole garden theme.
Cleanliness: 4/5 Good navigation through the site.
Aftertaste: 4/5 I hope you put up the artbook images and black and white images in your gallery soon!

Total: 22/25, 88%
Summary: A beautiful Sailor Moon site with a garden theme.

I liked: All the info on this site. There's in-depth explanation of each of the characters, Anime vs. Manga, a bio on Naoko Takeuchi, basic info about Sailor Moon, and useful Japanese words toped off with pretty manga images. The images all around the site are beautiful and high quality. I loved the selection of things to do on this site because there's a lot of stuff to do here to keep you occupied, such as quizzes, polls, etc.

What needs a little work: When I tried to access the Artbook 2, Artbook 5, and Black and White image galleries, it said the site was down. Please remove the links to them and then put them back up when you get the images for them scanned. Other than that, everything else it great.

Overall: I found this site pleasant with a nice and elegant look.

Tamara's Bishoujo Senshi Sera Muun page
Web author: Tamara Kroger

Layout: 4/5 The layouts on all the pages are pretty good.
Content:4/5 Pretty good.
Creativity: 4/5 Good amount of creativity.
Cleanliness: 3/5 Broken links, links to index page need to be added...(explained more in detail below).
Aftertaste: 3/5 Good effort.

Total: 18/25, 72%
Summary: A nice site.

I liked: All the multimedia things that you have, such as the mp3s, real audios, etc. You said you wanted opinions on your profiles, and I think they are pretty well written. They're not boring and I liked all the lively action and describing words used in the profiles. I thought the Cutest Guys picture gallery was pretty creative. I also enjoyed the recipies.

What needs a little work: You might want to include an image that displays the title of your page on your main page because the small text is sort of hard to find. People won't know the title of your site if they can't see it. Also, consider putting thumbnails in your picture gallery because it's easier for the visitors. In the profiles, please stick to either the anime or manga version, instead of mixing the NA names with the Japanese ones. Also, be sure to include links from the profiles back to the main profile page and the index on all the profiles. The links to the profiles for the Outer Senshi aren't working. I don't know if you haven't done them yet, or they're broken. On the merchendise page, please put pictures of the merchendise because I think people will be more comfortable buying those things when they actuallsy see a picture of it so they know what they're getting. On the Japanese Recipies page, here needs to be a link back to the main page. The link going to the Comming Soon page isn't working, so please fix that. Lastly, on the Fun Facts page and Japanese Recipes page, I found the text rather hurtful to my eyes. Please make the text darker so we all don't have to strain our eyes.

Overall: Great effort! Just make sure you make those adjustments that I suggested.

Pink Bunny
Web author: Terri

Layout: 5/5 Clear and simple.
Content: 3/5 Average.
Creativity: 3/5 Some creativity.
Cleanliness: 4/5 A lot of broken links, but layout looks pretty clean.
Aftertaste: 4/5 Cute site.

Total: 19/25, 76%
Summary: A cute site with pictures and info.

I liked: how everything is very organized and clean. The pictures in the gallery are great and unique. Some of those pictures I have never seen before. The info is pretty accurate.

What needs a little work: on most of your pages, please put links back to the main page so the navigation could be easier. The following pictures in your Chibi Usa picture galer aren't working: ca01.jpg, ca04.jpg, chibimanga06.jpg, and chibimanga10.jpg. There may be more in the other galleries but I don't have time to look through all of them :). think that in the Chibi Usa gallery, the link back to the main page leads to the wrong page because it links to a Pikachu page.

Overall: A nice, clean-cut page with a lot to offer.

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