Reviews #1

D. Soldiers
web author: Euphoria

Layout: 5/5
Content: 4/5
Creativity: 5/5
Cleanliness: 3/5
Aftertaste: 4/5

Total: 21/25, 84%
Summary: A page with stories about characters created by Euphoria.

I liked: the different layouts of each page. The drawings on this page were very nice and I especially liked the hilarious posters that the web author drew. The characters in the stories have very interesting lives. I found this page very original and the musical background kept me very entertained while I read the stories.

What needs a little work: When I saw the picture on the main page, I thought "Wow! This person is a really good artist!". It made me motivated to look at some more artwork that the web author drew so I went to the page containing images, but none of the links worked. So Euphoria, please try to fix that because I'm sure all of us would want to access somemore of your drawings. Also, maybe you should consider another layout for your misc. page instead of the plain black background and white text.

Overall: I liked this site and I found it very unique.

The Flower and the Moon
web author: P.D. Tulip

Layout: 4/5
Content: 5/5
Creativity: 5/5
Cleanliness: 3/5
Aftertaste: 5/5

Total: 22/25, 88%
Summary: This page contains pictures that the web author drew.

I liked: the pictures. They were creative and artistic. I also liked the The Flower Squad, which is a group that the web author made up. The quiz that tests your personality is a great idea.

What needs a little work: There are a few broken links on the page containing the Flower Squad pictures and also on the page with the Sailor Moon pictures. On the main page, maybe you should think about changing the color of the background from bright aqua to maybe a light blue to match the table.

Overall: Nice! Lots of creativity!

Codename: B.L.A.C.K.
web author: Almatos Miren

Layout: 3/5
Content: 4/5
Creativity: 4/5
Cleanliness: 4/5
Aftertaste: 4/5

Total: 19/25, 76%
Summary: An online Anime Fanzine

I liked: How the pages loads up pretty quick. Most of the stuff on the page, you need to be a member in order to access it, so I wasn't able to see everything on the site.

What needs a little work: I suggest that you should make the layout a smaller so the whole thing can fit on the screen. It will make it look better and also make navigation through your site easier. The heading on your page Newsletter page and all pages that display the articles doesn't show up so you should check if you uploaded it or you might have typed it's filename wrong in the HTML. Also, you should try to add more pictures on your site if possible to spice it up a bit.

Overall: Nice effort! Just consider my suggestions to help improve your page :)

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