The SM Network
Web author: Lady Diane

Layout: 4/5 Fast loading
Content: 5/5 Lots of stuff to do
Creativity: 4/5 Some creative sub pages
Cleanliness: 3/5 It's average
Aftertaste: 4/5 Pretty good page

Total: 20/25, 80%
Summary: A general Sailor Moon page.

I liked: How there is so much info about the characters and show. The easy layout on the main page was nice and simple with not much clutter. I enjoyed the useful Japanese words and thought the info about chopsticks was pretty interesting. I liked the poems on your page because I've never seen that before on a site. They are pretty good too. You also have nice selections of quotes and they were enjoyable to read. I'm also greatful that you took the time to add thumbnails and put a considerable amount of them on one page so it doesn't take a million years to load.

What needs a little work: There are a some spelling errors on your page. Please fix them. Also, on the info, please stick to either the NA version or the Japanese version. You talk about "The Scouts" in one page, then "The Sailor Senshi" in another, or "Tuxedo Mask" in one line, then "Tuxedo Kamen" in another. Keep the info consistent. The spelling of Tuxedo (as in Tuxedo Mask) is T-u-x-e-d-o not T-u-x-i-d-o. It is spelled like that more than once on your page, so please make sure you change it. The contest on your page sounds a little familiar to a contest that I saw on another page. Wait...it is the same exact contest. I don't know if you are aware about this, but I saw the same exact contest on a well known Sailor Moon page. Also, the headingds on your page looks exactly the same as Sailor Moon Free Graphics (http://www.smof.de/smgallery/freegraphics). Also, I think that the script that translates your name in to Japanese is broken because when I typed my name, it said that there was a script error and didn't work. The Jupiter game also didn't work. I also suggest that in the links page, seperate the banners from the text links, and there are also two banners that aren't showing up. Now on the "Link to Me" page, one of your banners isn't showing up.

Overall: A fun filled site that will keep you occupied.

The Luna Foundation Headquarters
Web author: John Brengman

Layout: 2/5 Kinda hard to navigate
Content: 3/5 Good amount of content
Creativity: 3/5 Not much...
Cleanliness: 2/5 Broken pics
Aftertaste: 2/5 The layout was kinda confusing

Total: 12/25, 48%
Summary: A site that needs a little work

I liked: How you gave people credit whenever you took something or when they did something for you. I think that that's just great. Also, I can see that you put a lot of effort and time into your site. I also found The Comic's Corner pretty funny.

What needs a little work: Ok...hmm...first, I was confused because I couldn't find the links to your sub pages. Then, I realized that I was not on the main page, but on the welcome page. To get you visitors not confused, I suggest to remove the whole welcome page and transfer the welcome message, updates and news, counter, etc. to the main page. Also, don't put so many things on the main page because it will just make your main page look too cluttered. Now onto the main page...since youfoundhave sooo many buttons, I think it's neccesary to make a seperate page for them because it just makes the page load slower. The navigation throughout your site is confusing. Please don't put the exact same menu on your main page on your sub pages because it's way too big. Sometimes you even put it there twice. There are also broken links, such as the Sounding Board. This is just my opinion, but I think that the background on your main page needs to be changed because the picture looks so small that I can hardly see it, so it makes it look like a lima bean.

Overall: A confusing site that needs some adjustments.

Togi's sailor Moon Page
Web author: Toji

Layout: 3/5 Simple layout
Content: 3/5 Not much content
Creativity: 3/5 A little creativity
Cleanliness: 4/5 Some broken pics
Aftertaste: 3/5 An average site

Total: 16/25, 64%
Summary: An average personal Sailor Moon page

I liked: How you made an attempt to do everything yourself and rip off info and other stuff from other pages. The info was a little too brief, but at least you made an attempt to write it yourself, rather than going to another page and copy what they wrote.

What needs a little work: The picture under the title on the main page is a little too big and takes too long to load. Try resizing it into a smaller and less loading picture. Hmmm...aperently, the webring that you belong to no longer exists. So you should take it off you page because it just adds on clutter and plus, the picture doesn't even show up. In the gallery, try to seperate the pictures by putting a bar or something in between them because it's kinda confusing to see the titles and pictures all together. And in the titles of the pictures, it's not Super Sailor Venus, it's just Sailor Venus. That goes for all the pictures. It will also look better if you center the pictures on the page, or even put thumbnails so people don't have to wait forever for the pics to load because those are pretty big pictures. Same thing in the Venus Shrine. You need to put thumbnails on this page too. Just don't slap on the pictures on the page like that. Also, one of the pictures doesn't show up. On the page with your banners, put a link back to the main page.

Overall: A nice, friendly site.

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